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VBP: Vincent and Carl by Critical-Error VBP: Vincent and Carl by Critical-Error
Vincent: Hay there <3
Carl: oh.. uh.. hi
Carl's brain: ohshitohshitgoawaydon'teatmefuckkkk


Of the two pictures I did for this thing, I'm starting to like this one better. Except for the fail anatomy. So I'd appreciate if you'd comment.. hell, I'd still like you to comment on the last one :C



Name: Vincent
Aliases: The Beast, Vinny
Age: Unknown
Height: 8'0"
Weight: Heavier than you
Sexuality: Pansexual
Personality: Despite the scars, the predatory gleam in his eyes, and the fact that he can probably benchpress a Voot cruiser or two, Vinny's a pretty nice guy. As long as you stay on his good side, anyway.

However, if you piss him off and/or happen to be Vortian while he's pissed off, he's not above shedding his hard-earned civility and letting his primal, animalistic aggressive nature take over. Once in a while he "hunts" for his own kind to slaughter when he's in a low mood, but it disappoints Avis so he's trying to cut back on Vortmeat.

Background: Raised from birth in the Vortian Fighting Arena, trained to be the first challenge fighter, known as The Beast. One day Trillium came to watch the fights, and after witnessing how they treated the "animals" afterwards (lots of whipping and such), even Beast, she decided to set them free. Somehow she managed to snag this big lug and take him home, where she slowly civilized him and then took him on as a personal bodyguard and enforcer.

During the civilization process, Carl had the misfortune to walk into Trill's office while the beast was still there, and immediately he pounced on the poor bastard and tried to tear him apart. The only way he got away was to slash Vinny's face with a knife (hence the stitches-scar on his face), which distracted him long enough for Trill to grab ahold of his collar and muzzle him while some other cronies took Carl to the infirmary.

Vincent always forgets this little detail when he tries to interact with Carl.. he sees it as water under the bridge, you know?

Reason for joining: Trill's getting her revenge for the pair of them entering her into the Miss Universe Pageant earlier.

Name: Carlos Ramirez Arellano.. but you can call him Carl. Actually, he'll shoot you if you don't.
Age: Vortian equivalent of late 20s-early 30s.
Height: 5'9"
Weight: 170
Sexuality: Bisexual
Personality: Slutty, aggressive, alcoholic, chain-smoking bastard. He doesn't give a shit about anyone but himself and his baby sister, Nina, and has a tendency to shoot anyone that crosses him.. or doesn't put out when he wants them to.

He only fears a few things: losing his manparts, getting shot in the back, his father returning from the dead to wreak his vengeance, and Vincent.

Background: Raised in the ghetto of Dormir by an apathetic mother and a douchebag father who abused and tormented him regularly, Carl learned to be vicious quickly lest the big bad world tear him apart. After joining a gang and getting into drugs and shit (lol peer pressure), he finally got the balls to take down his father, shooting him in the chest and guts a few times. He thought he killed him.. but considering there was only a blood trail left behind in the house the day after, with no sign of the body..

He went through several gangs and gained notoriety in the underworld as a sharpshooting, sharptongued asshole, which led to a seemingly random meeting with this green eyed, one armed chick in the bar, who challenged him to a shoot-off. It ended in a tie, which surprised the stranger, who then introduced herself as current head of that-mafia-that-still-needs-a-name and immediately offered him a part in her "family". He accepted, obviously, mostly because she's hot and he wants to tap that (but she won't let him).

One day, probably in the quest to tap that, he strolled into her office while a large scarred Vort was being taught how to be civilized. He attacked him on sight, clearly intent to kill and eat him, and though he escaped that event is still burned cleanly into his mind - especially when he looks at the man in question, who can't seem to get it through his thick animal skull that Carl does not want him anywhere near him.

He refuses to go on missions or even stay in rooms alone with him.. which is why this contest is going to suck monkey balls for him.

Reason for joining: Trill's getting her revenge for the pair of them entering her into the Miss Universe Pageant earlier. He wouldn't be too opposed to this except WHAT THE FUCK CANNIBAL VORT AS RUNNING MATE

Vortians (c) JCV
Vincent, Carl, everyone in their backstories and art (c) :iconcritical-error:
Beauty pageant -> :iconvortian-fetishists: [link]
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SoftieLocks Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
These are quite literally the two sexiest Vortians I've EVER seen! My goodness~ ♥
Khomaa Featured By Owner May 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Super suave
Delmaria94 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG... please tell me WHY THE HELL I HAVEN'T WATCHED YOU XD, this is so cool!
arkyux Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
fantasticos y macabros personajes
Invader-Germs Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2011
Haha, looking forward to seeing how they do. x3
Balron Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011
well that's got to be Vince's way of showing how much he actually likes Carl x3
Silly Vort beasts x3
PROtypeM3X Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
lol sucks to be carl xD
Wak-tak12 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh my gosh this is sooo good!
You're seriously my go to on here for vortain and irken male anatomy!
And the whole picture is just great! =D
ozd-girl14 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I love how in the time that I've watched your gallery, you improve on your drawing and details, but I can always recognize your style of drawing right off the bat :] It's awesome :D

What a wonderful team. Opposites sure do attract :] Nothing could possibly go wrong with these two partnered together xD
ergerg2 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Lol wow we've got some good looking male contestants even if they are few XD
Critical-Error Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
I'm glad you think so XD I'd fill out the remaining slots with MOAR but anyone besides these three entering wouldn't make any sense..
ergerg2 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Yeah Lol the guys are all outnumbered XD. Yeah, Plus you'd have like a million characters you could win with XD
TheDemonSurfer Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Trill's mob is the MWACA.
Ted-Drakness Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
X3 I've always loved Vincent, he and Cobalt are my faves of your Vortian OCs.
KaygeMonster Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
seriously loving the coloring, as usual. Really adds to their expressions and entire mood, which is awesome.
YAY for more vorts with detailed horns! =D
Ravenpuff Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Carl is just looking adorable in that panicky state XD
Madelonetjj Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student General Artist
Hehe, Carl, I feel your pain. xD
CreepinOn Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011
Vincent is so laid back and Carl is looking like he's about to shit bricks |D
His discomfort makes me lol
I look forward to seeing (reading?) these two in action X3
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